Inkitt
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The eight of a million

"I loved the writing style of the author and also the plot the only thing missing was a little more suspence with that this story would recieve a golden ticket"

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Really good!

"I like the story a lot but it seems a little rushed and like things aren’t adding up with the characters and how long they new each other I feel like they need to know each other a little longer before this all happens are put the kiss between Lucas and Airlia, her being the last one to get her stone, at the end."

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