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A courtyard of roses

"The way the story flows, the way each word is written and the way the characters develop is so amazing"

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Entrancing Stories

"Aurora spins you in a intricate net with her stories! They leave you hypnotized and as if you're truly there in the story. The details are so intricate that the visualization is so clear in the mind! "

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Another pleasing masterpiece.

"And again, you charmed me with a book. Alice is one of my favourites characters ever! She's probably the only one I trust completely along with Charlie. The characters, plotline, etc are again nicely crafted. I do not have much to say right now, as I haven't finished it yet. I'll move to Webnovel and see if I can access it through its website to continue with this masterpiece. Love this book!"

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An enchanting masterpiece! 💖💖💖

"i've absolutely no idea where to begin. firstly, let's talk about your descriptions: every line is so well portrayed, so gorgeously written, vivid and delightful to the eyes. the vocabulary used is so utterly sophisticated, the colors and intricate details are just as lovely! the writing style is distinctively alluring and immaculate and the characters are literally so charming and amazing! i love Alice for her quirk and Charisma, Charlie for his cuteness and innocence, Wyatt, Spade and Hartley and Miles are just so so charming and witty in personalities, i love it when they interact with Alice and seeing into their thoughts a little more just makes the story progress all the more interestingly. the whole story gives me so much fairytale dreamlike vibes and each chapter builds up to something more and more deep, stunning and intriguing! if i'd say something that'd be that you're truly one of my fav authors of all time. all your books read so far are beyond well written and are absolute masterpieces! this is surely not an exception! i love all your books, i love your writing style, the love the small lessons that you teach and tell through words sometimes, i really feel that your stories made from your mind is truly mind-blowing and overwhelming and so marvelous! the talent is just there- pure talent. i've no words- really i am in awe of your writing. all your books are sooo phenomenal and truly pure gold to read! you write all of the bestest books in my lifetime! your imagination is truly out of this world! i applaud you and your creativity! i've really enjoyed my time here, awaiting the next update hopefully soon but srsly take your time and i'm really a die-hard fan of your beautiful works!! this is beauty and words like no other for real!! keep writing x"

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Dreams

"Why do i have write something if i dont want yo"

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Brilliant!

"Please update soon!!!! I am dying to read the fuure chapters!"

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Dreamwalkers

"Her writing style and her way of portraying the characters emotion is absolutely amazing. I enjoy everything about this book. So far there is nothing I dislike of this book it's just absolutely amazing. I recommend it to people who love fantasy stories like me. "

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Simply enchanting

"One of the most beautiful stories on this platform. Like a modern fairytale but much much better. Honestly, it has a very intriguing plot but even more intriguing characters. Can't wait to see how the story will unfold!!!!"

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Dreamwalkers

"EVERYTHING IS JUST AMAZING. I love the writing style and how everything is described. Also love the characters and how they’re portrayed! This book is a 10000/10"

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Dreamwalkers

"I like every part of it, though I'm a little cautious of the two princes. I think they are not like what they seem, what they show to other people. Hmmm.. it keeps me interested, I'm always waiting for the author to update HAHAHA.. I'd recommend it to my friends, especially my best friend (she's a grammar nazi) because I like the wording (if that's even a word) of the story. "

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Love!

"Love the Alice in Wonderland references 🐇💕 Can’t wait for the next update! 😊"

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sad

"Unfortunately this is on a paying site so I cant review it properly as I would have to pay to do so. Being a traditional published Author I am not going to do that. I refuse to pay for a first draft. that isn't at a level to warrant payment. It is a shame that this will now never grace a book shelf."

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