Inkitt
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Refreshing Horror Plot

"I really love a good horror plot which isn't generic and I think you nailed it with your first chapter. I was scrolling thru the horror group and saw the description of this book so I decided to check it out. I was not disappointed. My only advice for you is the spacing of the sentences and paragraphs. It makes it a little difficult to read."

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Captivating Start!

"This first chapter (I hope more are soon to follow) smacks of an world ghost story! There are many exciting plot elements here and enough energy to keep the reader interested even one chapter in. Well done!"

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