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My Big Fat Demons

"Another really great book. To have to battle such dark demons and then finally find each other was a miracle. So happy for them both. Keep up the great writing. Another book we'll done"

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My big fat Demons

"This story was easy to read and follow. It felt like a great movie I didn't want to end. Being new to the world of BDSM/DDLG I found this story to be tragic, sad, exciting and sexy all in one. Inspite of all pain and drama there was true love to be had. Wow! "

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Very interesting

"This story is one of the more interesting ones I've read on here, I like how it drives into the world of DDlg and also tackles many issues having to do with self harm and mental illness. It's really a good book."

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Its a good story it needs a bit of editing

"Its a good storyline needs a bit of a clean up..."

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My Big Fat demons

"I loved it it was rough topicbut a beautiful story."

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Beautifully written.

"This story is Beautifully written. I love everything about this story. This story is very discreptive and it's easy to picture it like your watching a movie."

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Sad but beautiful

"This book is sad and dark yet beautiful in a strange way. It talks about alot of taboo subjects tnat need to be talked about but that often times people are afraid to talk about ."

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Awesome

"I like how they help each other overcome their pasts"

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Very different

"I must say I was pleasantly surprised with this book. The aproach of this author is very different. We all have our demons but we can just hope to be lucky enough to find love that helps curing it. Good work, please continue..."

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Hit home a lot

"Ironically I'm big like Nessie but with Reuben's fear of obese people. Couldn't make that shit up. But what got to me about this book was how true it is how a sub/Dom relationship would bring equality for both of them. The respect and trust they give each other to battle their demons is amazing. Although I'm not the biggest fan of Little headspace (kids changed that kink), I'm so in love with their dynamic. Please keep writing, or even extend this book? I think there could be a few more chapters detailing their relationship before that arsewipe comes in at the end. Or even extend the end scene, that would be interesting to understand the villain. "

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My big fat demons

"The story touched me and made me think of how i was in dark place and how I got out. "

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I have never read a book like this, I absolutely love it

"My husband"

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perfect

"I liked the way the story flowed and how the writer portrayed the characters. the story was perfect and i was at the edge of my set i would love to see this in stores."

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Great, though the story could use more details and moves along quite quickly

"Although the idea behind the story is EVERYTHING I find the story moves along quite quickly almost in a rushed fashion, I feel it could've been drawn out more with more details HOWEVER I cannot put this down. It's amazing. Kudos !! ❤"

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My Big Fat Demons

"This story/book was written with care and is Outstanding and fantastic! I love the story line and plot line they are wonderful! The story/book has an easy flow to it! I would recomend this to everyone into DDLG and BDSM!"

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Manatee

"I liked the way the story flowed and how the writer portrayed the characters. Great writing "

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My Big Fat Demons

"This story was captivating and very well written. I found the main character relatable and inspiring. I wish to one day find myself a Ruben. Great writing! "

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Jojo

"Its interesting"

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