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Gripping

"Quite a good story. Very detailed and written well. Greatly enjoyed."

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Brenda

"Brilliant!!! Couldn't comment in between. Had to finish it. Yet another awesome series Winchester 😍 waiting for the sequel. Summary: Another world, where a young insignificant Earth boy is the hero of this world, Aurora. Powers of different nature's, Light, Wind, Darkness, and Spirits. Adventure and the reinforcement of Good over Evil. The highlight here is the great and beautiful upliftment of people who feel inferior. Well done on the beautiful details of the new world , the amazing, descriptive events and the wonderful plot you came up with. 👏👏👏"

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Eclipse : the beginning

"I really enjoyed reading this story and I can wait to see where the story unfolds. I like the plot line and how the characters interact with one another. It set up for a great adventure that I dieing to know and be apart off. the build up and all the information you get in the story line was well done and didn't seen to take so long in building up it was a good flow with that which made it a lot of fun to read. "

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Eclipse: The Beginning

"I've only finished the first chapter so far but I can tell this is going to be a great, and far-reaching story. The writer not only brings the main character and his personality to life but manages to convey the depths of his pain and sense of being fundamentally different. The story seems to be on the darker side of fantasy so far, but it is written very well and I look forward to reading on!"

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