Inkitt
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Interesting read

"I am enjoying the book so far.."

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Like it

"I need a part two. I need to know if they got together or not. The story was good"

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Dirty little secret

"I love this story ❤📚"

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Astounded

"I have to say this book is good, but the ending is really heartwrenching🥺🥺🥺 I thought they'd make up after the breakups but no Author you got to take me on another rollercoaster 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'm kidding this book is awesome but I'd like a book two please Bailey has unfinished business she needs to get to and what happened with Vince and Hannah? See definitely book two needed 😅😅😅😅"

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Such a great read

"Loved reading this story, couldn't put the phone down.."

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Cayla

"Description is amazing! "

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Very good book

"Very nice to read the story "

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Nice

"Great story. Bailey is so funny"

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Dude! I cried😭!

"I love this book it is truly heartwrenching at it's finest. The one thing I dislike is the ending becauce we can infer what happened, but we don't know what acruakky happened, which leaves me so hurt but satisfied by this book. I would recommend this book to all 14+ people it's good but it's heartwrenching, and has a few sexual scenes towards the end. I choose my rating because of the fact that it was wonderful but there were a ton of grammar mistakes but I did love her writing style. By the way, if your a human you will most likely cry at the end. I did😭😭."

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Dirty little secrets

"This book is very interesting and I Luke it very much ."

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Dirty Little Secrets

"Like the overall story. It shows that true love stands overall... In stories yes but in real life don't think so. Like her back story. Like her crued attitude..."

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Grammar problems

"I like characters but there are many grammar errors "

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Promising ☺️

"I honestly think you have a nack for creating a wonderful story! But - big but 😉 - you do need to work on your technical writing skills. Some phrases weren't right, some due to normal typos, others because of grammar. I also think you have an interesting enough story to slow down certain bits and elaborate on the side stories, unless ofcourse you plan to give them all a separate one, in which case I am already curious to find out what happened to everyone else ☺️"

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Evaluation

"Point blank this story needs work. Great plot great story line of events. However very clumsily written typos, missing words, weak character development, confusing events. I would suggest you sit down and seriously edit this story if you fix your mistakes and makes the characters grow more together. Than you have a solid foundation for a great story. Who knows maybe even one people will have to pay to read. "

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Dirty little secret

"In my opinion it was confusing, the caracteres where not explored, things happening without a cause... I don't know I felt lost sometimes. But I like the end, and with work is gonna be a great story. Congrats. "

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dirt little secret

"There were so many errors while reading this. At some points i got confused as who was talking and what was going on. But it had a good plot."

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Dirty Little secret

"Enjoyed the overall plot but the grammar and errors in the story made it really difficult to enjoy. They’re are some parts that I felt escalated too quickly in the story. It wasn’t a bad story if just could have used a bit more editing and substance "

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