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The ghost shack

Summary

"When I saw that shack I knew that it must have been some kind of ritualistic place according to the color and material. Dad said that it was just some shack a street kid must've made , but i knew he said that out of sarcasm " I said . "This shack my boy , its been there for over 200 years and people have been puzzled by it for years and even me , myself , once investigated the shack but no one can discover who build it and why ". "Dont worry , i will find out !"

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Excerpt
Chapters
2
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1 live in navada


Life was super easy here in nevada for the 1 week we were here since we moved from Chicago . The only problem was always school when we we move to a new state . It was like bullies knew my every move and that bumped me out . To make matters worse , why wouldn't i have a little sister ? Her name is jessica and she is a computer freak !

The next morning i found my mom screaming her lungs out . "Mike! Wake up ! You are late for school ! " she screamed . Mike. What a name for a shy kid ! "Yeah" i said bummed out and tired . I got out of bed and ran to the bathroom to take a quick shower . I saw my mom run to Jessica's bedroom to wake her up as she was late too . I showered as fast as possible because i wasn't the only one late for school. Jessica is a beauty freak too and she wouldn't go to school without wearing some black and yellow sneaker or wearing tight jeans . I ran out of the shower pushing jessica away to run into my bedroom to get dressed . As soon as i was done , my mom was waiting for me downstairs in the kitchen dissapointed . " hey don'tforget your lunch! " she screamed . "I don't need lunch !" I screamed sarcastically. I got out of the house and stepped into the car to get late some more. I wanted to get late so that i can get to school as soon as the bell rang so that i dont have to run into bullies this time . Jessica was doing a good job getting late , despite her being a beautician!

And that is when i saw something lurking beyond the woods and behind the trees at our next door neighbor . It stepped out and came for me !



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