What is your opinion?
Beautiful
"'Brevity is the soul of wit' - this piece as a whole or in parts is remarkable. Brava"
Amazing Potential
"“TYRANNUS” by Tamuril is a collection of poems whose concepts switch between history and philosophical ideas. Overall the poems are brilliant together and represents the tone of the book brilliantly both individually and together. Honestly beyond the basic technical techniques of writing I don’t like to offer much on a poet’s writing style. Because I don’t know if a certain line or stanza was written the way I read it on purpose or not. Including punctuation. Being that poetry overall is an expressive discipline. Therefore, I offer to just keep a look out for the basics such as word choices and make sure the arrangement is still understandable to the random reader. The poems individually, as I said overall idea wise is amazing, however, I would offer to make sure the idea is completely expressed and that the picture or idea you are painting with words is full. I think this goes for the more philosophical pieces just because I couldn’t tell right away which pieces were historical or philosophical, but that could be just me. I would still encourage others to read this book because the writings are good. I would say keep writing and refining your style because I do want to see more in the future."
