What is your opinion?
Wow
"very nise"
Pulled off well
"The style he has chosen perfectly suits his story. Usually, I am put off with this form of older English, but J.M.Enot pulls it off rather well. I'm not one for lush writing though he has not overdone it, it comes across as well edited with the right amount of detail. I would say it is not a commercial book fan; it is for a niche market that I feel readers of this style and genre would thoroughly enjoy. It is written for a more artistic and select group due to the adult writing format. If you are into biblical or other old English writing and historical types genres, then this is one to pick up. Good stuff."
A Compelling Ride
"What a work! It was just one chapter but I am hooked. The author created a setting so vivid through his/her words. Quite a lot can be learned from the characters just from their interactions. For improvements: Maybe reduce the use of archaic words in dialogues or maybe save them from certain characters because it can be quite puzzling for non native speakers like me :) "
Very Good
"The dialogue definitely sets the tone of the story. It definitely inspires ideas of Lord of the Rings or like the legends of Camelot/Middle Ages. Keep at it!"
Great job
"Couldn’t put it down if you want a book that will keep you on edge from cover to cover you need to read this. The whole thing is described in such a way that you can smell the smoke hear the sounds and if you are familiar with them even smell the smells."
