19 chapters read
definitely captivating
"My only objection is to the grammatical/spelling errors! The story is (as the required title indicates) absolutely captivating - I'll definitely finish this in one sitting - and that would be true even if it wasn't as short of a story as it is (and don't take that as an insult, it isn't meant to be one!). I admit I was initially a little bit derisive of the chapter lengths, but I am now of the opinion that each has been exactly as long as it needed to be. If, in the future, you continue with the same characters or story lines/plots/themes, I would guess that you could fold this entire book into one or two longer chapters (one per character, maybe?) and then incorporate it with the rest of your writing. But as it stands?- I'm hypnotized and can't wait to get back into the story - keep up the good work! :) <3"
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