What is your opinion?
The Moon's Pawn
"This story has a unique and powerful writing style, with detailed descriptions that really bring out the emotions. The beginning, especially the character’s dialogues during the child’s birth, immediately caught my attention and pulled me into the next chapters. What I liked the most is Veronica—her emotions, attitude, and fighting spirit are vividly described throughout the story. I’m eager to see how the ending unfolds."
Appreciation and Commission Request
"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "
A stunning balance of emotion and storytelling.
"Where to begin... I absolutely loved the way the author wove in details that are not only beautifully written but also so true to the time period certain scenes reflect. It added such authenticity and depth. The subtle threads of humor, perfectly placed, made me smile at just the right moments. But what truly stood out was how the author managed to capture it all—the heart that hurts, the heart that feels, and the heart that hopes. A stunning balance of emotion and storytelling. "
The moon's pawn
"It is a really intresting story keeps you wanting for more, be sure to click on it and thank me later, I will gladly recommend it for anyone"
Review
"WEREWOLVES! GREEK MYTHS! YASSSSSSSSSSS!!!! Honestly though, you had me when you first put in The Hundred Years War, I'm a sucker for all things historical and damn, I love the way you blend the two time periods. I cannot reccomend this enough, and my mind is just a mess waiting for another update!! Your writing is beautiful!!!!"
HOOKED RIGHT AWAY
"OKAYYYY GIRL YOU ARE NOT MESSING AROUND. I love when plots can hook a ready right away, and this one DEFINITELY does. I was immediately intrigued by the King & Queen’s relationship and how he’d react to having a girl. Not to mention, what comes immediately following and how you switch last and present. I’m so curious to continue! I know I’m just at the beginning BUT I have no doubts that this story will be straight 🔥. Nice work!"
The Moon's Pawn
"There is such great world building in this story so far with so many complex characters. I can already tell the main character is a force and I love her! I'm excited to learn more about her. The writing style helps to tell the story wonderfully. My only thing would be to just clean up the grammar a little. Otherwise an amazing ongoing story! ❤"
