What is your opinion?
Great!
"Great story so far. The writing style is flawless, and engaging. Definitely a great start to a Sci-fi novel. I look forward to seeing the rest of the story unfold."
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"I really like the characters so far and the writing style is awesome. Good introduction to the characters and the plot and overall enjoyable and fun to read. I think a the actions that lead up too Blake and Alec leaving the car was a bit abrupt and then cooled too quickly but that’s really my only note. One or two grammar errors hear and there but nothing to complain about really. I can’t wait to see where this story goes! I have a prediction that, based off the intro and what I can assume is foreshadowing, what’s-her-name is gonna be taken by aliens. "
Very good beginning!
"You have quite a relaxed writing style, which is a very good thing. You take your time explaining the characters and the beginning of the plot. Which is very good in a fantasy story, with a world of your own making and its own rules. However, if I may give you a slight tip: you seem to type extremely fast, as sometimes, your letters have been swapped. Like 'becuase' instead of 'because'. However, those are some minor details. Another tip that I want to give you is this one: give your main character an appearance. While we do know his/her name (Alec could be a male or female name, in my opinion), we don't really know what your main character looks like. I do like, however, that you gave your reader ample insight in what he liked and disliked mentally. All in all, a very solid start! Keep it up, and have fun writing your next chapters!"
