Inkitt
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Good Story

"I liked the fantasy and adventure aspect of the story. It is really fast paced and takes you through various twists and turns. Truly an adventure. I love the dynamics between the trio. Looking forward for the updates. PS: if you have time, please do checkout my story-Moon Curse."

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Insightful

"I enjoyed the creative look on our reality and beliefs the thoughts you've come up with or received through intuitive and critical thinking aspects brings out a spin on things that can keep you engaged and wanting more. I'm just expressing my opinion and believe you have a bright future in writing because I believe the application of your plot the twists and turns the psychological interpretation on your view of things and the bold and used throughout most books shows etc especially in fantasy and science fiction the drama and secrecy about secrets also challenges ourselves to search for truth. I can't wait to read the next little bit and really look forward to seeing how this novel comes together 😊"

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Very nice

"Very nice thinking.... in didn't complete but will complete soon"

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One sided

"I can't help but feel she should voice what's going on with her dad with the whomever she has contact with its utterly frustrating that she's so quiet."

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Nightmare

"It is not that good of a story, it is dull needs more excitement in it"

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