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The beast of the creek

"A nice book for anyone who wants to read a short story! The descriptions are amazingly detailed and the adrenaline is pumping through out the story! Well done author!!"

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Sorry for the 3 stars

"I loved the concept of the story a lot. I just thought there was too much telling and not enough showing in this piece. While the overall concept and plot of the story was unique and cool, I thought it was distracting to read everything in an almost list format. With a little tweaking, this could be amazing."

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