What is your opinion?
Smooth
"The plot is great, the flow of the story is smooth and the writing style is solid. Great job author! The dynamic between the characters and the transition between different scenes was done effortlessly. I was hooked on the first chapter because of the descriptions. A little polishing on the grammar and punctuations is needed, and some complex sentences can be broken down into simple and precise sentences, but overall, this is great story! 💓💓💓 Keep writing and inspiring Author💓"
Great world-building
"I found the idea of the modern world infused with elements of magic and fantasy an intriguing concept. I remember a movie, I thought unfairly panned, called Bright that had similar elements. Rather than trying to encompass the overall concept, the author takes the football and makes a small-scale story about this one person living within this world and playing by its rules. I look forward to future works from the author."
Amazing
"Overall, this is a really great and strong story. The plot is solid and well thought out, it is consistent and flows very well. The general pace is set at a reasonable level as well, and the word usage is great. The way things are described and portrayed really get you sucked in and leaving you wanting more. All I can suggest for improvement areas is to look at big chapters. Some of the paragraphs are too long which can make it hard to read, so look at splitting these up and look at condensing down some chapters or splitting them up =] However, with that said, it's a great read, solid story and has a whole heap of potential! I can't wait to read more!"
Review
"I really love this. Your writing style fits the story you want to tell beautifully, and descriptive. The only thing I would suggest is for you to break up your really big chapters, to make it a bit easier to read! Keep up the wonderful writing! "
