The Hidden Girl : Lucy by Rajanya at Inkitt
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The Hidden Girl : Lucy

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Summary

This story is full of suspense , mystery , drama and surprises . You need to read the full story to get the best experience. This story is about the Magnolia Villa where once lived a beautiful couple . But in that villa a murder took place . This is mainly about Lucy who is the loving adopted daughter of the couple . Learn who was the murderer and what happened when a milk man came into the house to sell milk . He used to come every day . But what if the spirit gets angry due to the disturbance caused by him ... Will the milkman be able to escape from that villa alive ? Read to drive the story forward in details ...

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

The Best Couple ??!

In a small town , there was a VILLA called Magnolia Villa . People in the town believes that Magnolia Villa is a cursed villa .

The history of the Villa was :

There lived a new couple , their loving adopted daughter --- LUCY and their maid . She was very friendly and loved Lucy .

After a few years , one of the couple noticed that the other is cheating on her . She became furious and decided to take revenge by taking a compensation of life .

One dark night , she took a knife and without making any noise she stamped 13 times on her soulmate .

This incident was witnessed by the maid and Lucy . It was important for her to kill them as well to avoid being arrested .

The maid took Lucy to hide in a safe place . It was the attic which seemed to be the most safe place . Lucy's mother was searching for them like a mad person ...

When she was searching she got a trunk . Something was written on it " My love ".As it was in the rack of her husband , she was sure that it was not she who is referred in this trunk. She opened it and yes it wasn't​ she . There was a lot of pictures of her husband and an other woman . She soon got evidence which proved that this woman is the sister of her husband .

In other hand their maid instructed Lucy to hide behind the well , in a little distance from the Villa . She locked herself in a closed room in which there was no windows.

The Spirit of Lucy ' s father got angry . He was frustrated with his wife . He told himself " How can she even think that I can cheat on her " . He determined his mind that he will kill whoever steps into the villa .

He went upto the maid and suddenly appeared in front of her . She was already suffering due to lack of oxygen and as she was shocked to see the Already Dead Man , she was in the grip of cardiac arrest .

The Evil Soul was burning in the fire of revenge . He headed out to Lucy . But to his suprise he can't touch her . He saw a pendent of Jesus Christ in the neck of Lucy . It was given to her by the maid . It would protect her from The Evil.

As he can't touch her , he thought to just appeare​ in front of her so that she will also die out of fear and so happened . She was not able to think what she can do and so she jumped into the well and ceased .


To Be Continued ---

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I liked it ...
I will wait for the 2nd part ...
concept is very clear ...
just loved it ...

7 years
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Hi, I’m carlo a professional manga and comic artist with years of experience in visual storytelling.
I came across your story on Inkitt and was hooked by your writing and rich character depth.
Your storytelling inspired me, and I’d love to adapt it into a dynamic comic or manga.
Let’s connect! Discord: elowen_jon10

a year

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