54 chapters read
"AMAZINGGGGG definitely worth the read this story drags you in to its magically world of ups and downs sad and happy moments different from anything I’ve read lately. Hope the author updates soon "
41 chapters read
"Wow!! I haven’t had a book suck me in like this one has in a while! Started reading it at 10:30 pm, got to chapter 47 by 3:00 am. Read it straight through because it is just so good!! Loving everything about it! "
52 chapters read
"Once I started reading I could not put this book down. Probably the best book I have read on Inkitt, such great writing it makes me feel like I'm there with the characters. I can see it being published, and in stores. Can't wait for more chapters!"
49 chapters read
"Great read. Great story build up and concentrates on different aspects not just mating. I love that in a story. "
49 chapters read
"Love this story, hope it continues. The characters are well established and thought out. I can’t even choose a favorite, they are all that good. I hope you follow up with Valens story after the war. So many unanswered questions! Please continue"
33 chapters read
"This must be one of my favorite books one this app. I love this storyline and ally the characters. The plot is amazing and the writing style is excellent. I really recommend everyone to read this book. "
40 chapters read
"I have read many incredible books on Inkitt, but this one has to be a personal favorite. The plot and storyline are so well put together, almost seamlessly. It's easy to get a sense of the characters and how everyone fits so perfectly in their place. I would absolutely recommend this book to anyone and especially to those interested in fantasy. "
3 chapters read
"As a full time writer (during Quarantine ha, ha) I'm always writing, its my addiction. I rarely stop to read, but when I do I make my time and what I chose to read worth it. I wasn't prepared to read about some memorable characters and a fae princess. How cool is that...? Even the history of the fae's and the dividing territories is sheer genius. (snap, snap). I love RAILYN, let me just get that out of the way. Head strong and vibrant. The way you describe her features is awesome in itself. The way she kicked that guard's butt when he tried to abuse her in prison was freaking amazing. And Lola reminds me of my dog Gizmo whom died from a hit and run 9 years ago, breaking my heart. I enjoyed this book, I hate that it wasn't longer. I say this with aplomb and joy: Thank you for quality work. You have a new fan and supporter. DAPHAROAH69"
38 chapters read
"Loved it can't wait for more"
47 chapters read
"Love your story! "
30 chapters read
"This book is incredible! The plot is so unique and so well-written! Can't wait to see how it ends! "
35 chapters read
"I love your writing! I read the whole book in one day, couldn’t stop. It isn’t like the other fantasy books I’ve read so far, your story is unique to me. I would recommend this book to everyone! Thank you for sharing :) "
25 chapters read
"I like all the different elements of fairies, witches and halflings. They all have their own personality of various degrees. I would recommend this book to everyone I know. This is the first book I have ever read on this subject but I couldn't be more thrilled that I did. I will be reading more books like this from now on."
47 chapters read
"Really enjoy the storyline so far, but there seems to be some repetition of the same words and phrases a little more than I prefer. But overall love the story"
4 chapters read
"I LOVE Lady Death!!!!!! Hannah Laine is an amazing author!!! I love this book! Each chapter sucks you in and the details make you feel like you are actually there. Her ability to world build is amazing! I want to go visit (most) of the places she describes. I think I would skip Arden though. I finished reading part one and can not wait until she publishes part two! This book has all of my favorite things: a strong female protagonist, a guy that the girl will eventually fall for, fantasy, adventure, romance, and action. Plus it involves Fae so bonus points for that!!"
2 chapters read
"Lady Death starts out pretty dark, but I quickly got hooked, wanting to know what happens next to Railynn!!! Each character seems to be well developed and thought out! I love the writing style too!! It is so descriptive, it makes you feel like the places and people in the stories are real!! Also amazing use of writing in 3rd person!!! Most fantasy novels that I have read are all in 1st person. I feel like you get so much more information from it being written in 3rd person!! I wish you would go ahead and publish the next chapters!!! I am already hooked on this story and CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!"
46 chapters read
"Really enjoying this to be honest the only thing that keeps catching my eye are the slight word errors or spelling mistakes which I put down to excitement in writing or predictive text either way it doesn't take from how much I am enjoying this story, well done I'm enjoying the originality of it"
1 chapters read
"I do not like the misspelt words but the storyline and all was really good"
21 chapters read
"Likeable main characters, solid plot. Grammar, spelling and cadence in need of attention. All in all, would like to read more."
45 chapters read
"While this novel is still in progress, the existing chapters carry the reader along as details about the characters and the world are slowly revealed. The author clearly takes the time to develop her characters. There are instances where setting details seem slightly disjointed and there are some distracting grammatical errors, yet nothing that couldn’t be easily fixed with a bit of editing/proofreading and nothing out of the blue for a first draft. So far the plot is a bit slow as the main focus is on the characters, their inner turmoil, and their journey to the heroine’s home, but I’m sure more well defined external conflict and action is just around the bend. Personally, I love the excerpts at the beginning of the chapters, it’s a nice touch that really helps to make the reader feel as if they are visiting a whole new fantastical realm. This definitely feels like a first draft, but so far great job :) "