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Amazing

"Its a good example of classic going to modern with a twist of fantasy love story. I like it, keep it up!"

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Incredible

"Nice story keep it up!"

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WS Romeo and Juliet

"The story is heavy as it has many sad take to the plot itself. Its full of sad emotions, goodbye and heartache as it takes to the path of the classic style of Romeo and Juliet."

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Classic

"The book itself is refreshing in its own way as it delivers a unique set and turn from the well beloved tale of Romeo and Juliet. I am looking forward to the progress thank you."

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Nice

"The story is catchy as it takes a different look at the classic tale of Romeo and Juliet. The characters are heavy with emotions as the story builds to be in the dark romance since it is in line with the tragic tale. But all in all its a nice story."

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Romeo and Juliet?

"The plot and core of the story is unique. The author took the classic tale of Romeo and Juliet in a different spin. The writing style is okay. Great work!"

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Interesting

"I find the plot interesting so far. Good take to the classic genre of a tragic romance that was very cliché to take in this era, yet never fails to be romantic. I hope that this book will turn more exciting in the future."

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Mystery

"Very well created as the novel revolves in the elements of reincarnation about second chances at love as I depicted that the antagonist is a natural problems couples faces in the real world where they needed to fight for it and learn giving each other a second chance."

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Amazing

"Like the summary I've read so far, as I like the quotes from the book. It's deep that involves some quite dark elements, but the romance is great. Keep it up!"

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Romance

"The story builds its unique, but catchy take of the the classic romantic love story of Romeo and Juliet. as the author gave it something new like reincarnation and war in a death and life game.. It falls on sacrifices hope and turn of love that is needed to be fight to come true. Nice story."

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Love Will Lead You Back

"Its interesting from its overall perspective. It takes a unique turn for the classic beloved love story of Romeo and Juliet. The characters was introduce with their individual struggles and their goal to find love with the death in two. Its nice that it involves angels and demons. Sacrifices and hope just to be with the one they love."

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A romantic sci-fi

"This story centers an impact not just for the young at hearts, but those who experience love and second chances, a fight for what's important and setting something free in order to have the greater good. For the characters set forth not by their personal ego, but a fight for a chance to deal with the unknown and known circumstances that they are facing. it teaches us the value of time and the consequences that we ought to face for forcing something that should be not."

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Reincarnation

"Amazing work of art that revolves around the mysterious side of reincarnation, death and rebirth."

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romeo and juliet

"i really liked the core concept of the novel. taking the tragic tale of romeo and juliet and making your own version is incredible! especially, the world building has great potential. as i was reading, i struggled to understand what was going on. most of your sentences were confusing and sometimes over complicated. i think a bit of simple exposition could help. "

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Angel's spring

"The plot seemed really intriguing and promising, but I'm afraid it was hard for me to read through the text. I don't understand most of your sentences. The syntax is bad and, in some places, you even forget the verbs. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes, too. If English is not your first language, an online editor like grammarly could help you with technical things like punctuation and stuff. And the tenses, especially, since you seem to alternate between past to present simple, and sometimes you even use the past participle form of the verb. Again, the plot is good and you could do some amazing world-building here. Keep up the hard work!"

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