What is your opinion?
Enthralling read
"All aspects of this story a great. The timing, the style in particular and the dark, gripping plot. It’s the sort of story that you can’t put down until you’ve read right through the end it’s so captivating. Most of all it’s beautifully written with amazing emotion in the narrative. I think the ending is fab, as it gives a bit of a ‘will there or won’t there be a follow up?’ Which would be great. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it as it’s my favourite genre to read. Amazing work!"
Riveting!
"I could only give the plot four stars because you need to write more! The world you've created is facilitated with fascinating concepts and dark turns, I wish there was more to read! You said it was a short story, but I vote it should be ongoing!"
Amazing!
"This short story is definitely worth reading! It has great pacing, first of all. New writers, including myself, often struggle with this, but here it is done exceptionally well. The plot is suspenseful and you feel empathy for the main character. There are also some great lines that resonated really well with me in this story. Excellent work! Keep writing!"
