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The Girl Who Stopped Time

"Absolutely incredible plot and the writing is beautiful. I’m genuinely surprised that this hasn’t been published yet because it would be an absolute hit. definitely a new favourite "

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The girl who stopped time

"One of the best stories I've read on inkitt. Unique plot, great world-building, and a strong female character. It needs a sequel! A few grammar mistakes, though. You keep mixing up your-you're, were-we're, and to-too. Fix these up and your book will be awesome."

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Nice

"wow, I got halfway through and so far wow. It's really interesting I shall continue reading as well, just keep up the good work. I like your technique, small mistakes but barely seen. if you're concentrated you wouldn't even notice it. so can't wait to read another book. well done love it!"

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Time

"The cover is also really cool and beautiful, Also I see the grammar, Punctuation is improving in very chapter, which is good! I hope you take your time on writing your chapters and I will keep on supporting this book no matter what!"

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Awesome, reminds me of Alice in Wonderland.

"It's awesome, and it kinda reminds me of Alice in Wonderland."

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