What is your opinion?
Go on!
"It cannot be. No. I need more, the blank spaces cultivates, the mysteriousness of it all. Which either leads a reader confused or wanting to know more and believe me. I need to know more so I implore you to write on!"
Nice!
"I liked it so far. I loved how you showed a Mikhail as Water Angel...message behind it. Water pollution is a major problem in the world. This book is quite different I wanna read it till the end. So keep updating. Keep up the good work Anne!"
don't know what to write here???
"its great.but am wondering.did the angel hypnotize the boy or something that he came to where she was?, and is the girl a fallen angel?,What is she doing on earth. i love the way you wrote the first chapter is flawless.its great.i'll like to read more."
my POV
"I wouldn't like to tell it as a complete story. For me, it felt like a scene from a story. Though, it sounds interesting to me. The author has a unique way to focus on the area of pollution, which is very nice. my advice is to add some more spices, some more scenes and characters if you want this to make a full grown and attractive story"
