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Fated mate

"Its a bit sad ,and exciting,cant wait to see what happens ,wil she find out or wil they just live happily."

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Kerri Burch

"I love the story "

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My sweet lilly

"I liked it very much. I hope the sequel comes soon. I can hardly wait to see what happens. I don’t know if it’s a hunter or rogue that drugged her. And see how Jaxon explains himself about hiding his true identity. And what he is going to do about what happened to her. Please put the sequel soon as possible! 😔"

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Great book

"Such a cute book. Was hooked all the way so far"

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Good read .

"It’s a good read."

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My sweet lily

"Great book. Can't wait for the next one. Lily has now been kidnapped. Only this could happen to her. Good thing she went through training "

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My sweet loly

"This book is great!still the romance stuff which is awesome, but the way it was written keeps you in suspense, and very interested!cant wait to read more!!!😁 "

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My sweet Lilly

"There is a definite need for editing but story is sweet and keeps you reading, charecters are interesting and are developing nicely..."

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Fated Mates

"I loved this story? However I was disappointed cuz there was nothing said about the date between Jaxson and Sue I want to know what she knows. I am so excited for the sequel! Please write fast... Keep up the great written words!"

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My sweet lilly

"Loved it. Please make more. "

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worth reading

"the beginning of the story is very interesting. it pushed me to read more. The main character, the way author explained, raises a curiosity to know more about them."

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My Sweet Lily

"I can’t believe it is over for is one! More is needed for sure!! "

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My sweet lily

"Omg so good i want more. The interactions and pov of everyone draws the reader in and hooks them.MORE PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP"

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Cute story

"I think you have Sky and Lilly mixed up in the earlier chapters. Should fix that up other than that I am intrigued on how it goes further."

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My Sweet Lilly

"This book definitely held my attention! The story flowed very well and was easy to follow. Cannot wait to read more from this author and to finish reading this book!! "

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My Sweet Lily

"This story feels so incomplete. I also found it finny that yhe female protaganist was so clueless about mating, especially since she's 21... Also thanks to the author for the headsup on spelling mistakes but in my opinion, she should have proofread her writings before posting the story. There were quite a lot of paragraphs that makes no sense, especially with all the spelling and grammar mistakes..."

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The sweet

"Very nice read. There are grammar mistakes but it's good."

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Great

"Can't wait"

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Good book

"Its a good read "

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Interesting Start

"I am curious about how this story is going to go. You have an interesting start and I will continue reading. I am curious about how the characters will develop as well! I just have one question. Is this a playwright or an actual novel? Because if it is a novel, I would suggest not writing the dialogue as a playwright. That's a big no-no but it can be easily fixed! I used to write my dialogue like that when I was younger and didn't know how novels were really written. That's the only suggestion I have so far! Keep writing! -Nsablo"

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