What is your opinion?
Interesting Read
"The theme of this book is interesting. It can be seen the author has a clear idea as to where this story is going. There are several unfamiliar words and names that would need more explaining, but not too much that will make the readers confused. The paragraphs are quite too long for my taste but not too complicated. I am curious of how this story is going to proceed :)"
A Real Page Turner!
"Very engaging story.There is incredible world building that establishes well-defined, yet thought-provoking, lore. The dialogue feels natural and unforced. I found myself laughing at times because of the witty, sly, tongue-in-cheek humor, which is difficult to pull off. Only critique: Start a new paragraph when another character starts talking. Also try using more words for said (i.e. replied, snapped, agreed, insisted, stuttered, hissed, warned, explained, cried, etc.). As far as the actual content of the dialogue, I have no qualms. Lastly, there is one part in chapter 5 (Aftermath), where Malachai goes from pushing Max up against a wall, demanding answers, to completely trusting him. It doesn't seem like he would have any obligation to divulge anything to Max. Maybe just revisit that part of the story and make it more obvious that the characters are coerced into cooperating out of necessity. Outstanding plot so far. Anything that has to do with an occult or demonic forces always gives me the heebie jeebies, but that didn't stop me from enjoying your novel. It is just so well written. The setting is well described and character descriptions are precise. I have very little trouble placing myself into the world you have made. I really like how you do not just exposition dump the various complexities of your universe. You let the reader figure it out for themselves. Great job."
HELLBOUND
"Okay, the title of the book has me intrigued. The plot line is good, suspenseful and is a page turner. I have read only three chapters yet, but I'm gonna read it all. The author knows where the story is going. So, I like it. "
Intriguing
"Okay so at first I was kind of intrigued to read this book because of the cover, but when I read the first three paragraphs I found my self wanting to know what happens next. Suspense filled stories are so my thing and i got more than I expected. it was definitely worth reading! Looking forward to more of this author"
