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Excellent way to begin

"This story is very good despite only being the beginning. To the author, please do update soon."

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Procastinating

"This story is really amazing and motivating . I like the part where the author talks about the friendship. Waiting for the next chapters eagerly. Keep up the good work and I'm sure you are going to be a great writer in future. "

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Nice

"The cancerian abelful angel promises a great deal of self reflection and procrastination. I Like where the author starts the journey of this novel. Let me know when the second chapter will be coming.. Good work u will be the good writter......."

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Wonderful Potential

"The writer is still experimenting with her style and finding her feet. At the same time, she took the challenge of writing a tale revolving around an illness that is still some times a sensitive topic, a wonderfully brave move. Although there are times when it seems to switch between the points of view of who is narrating the story, I have no doubt about the feelings she is trying to put through. Currently, It promises to lead you anywhere, from a sad romantic tale to something uplifting to a tragedy after chapter one. Personally, I'm hoping the Lead Character gets well again and finds the love of her life. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story."

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promising

"The cancarian abelful angel promises a great deal of self reflection and procrastination. I like where the author starts the journey of this novel. But I would still wait for few more chapters to fully determine its potential. Good luck!!"

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