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Unexpected and yet suspected.

"It was beautifully written. I don’t even have the words to describe my emotions right now. I just read this on amazon and I’m blown away. It hit every feeling I’m sure the author was attempting and then some. Reece’s little Supernova. "

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Delirium

"Unexpected ending but perfect at the same time. Writing style is so good that you will fall in love with the story. One of the reason to like this story is that even if it is a short story, it contain all the emotions and will make you fall in love. And i had a smile on my face while i read it and tears when it ended. "

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Delirious

"Such a totally different story line so very considerate of you "

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Best Short Story

"The author has a way with making you fall in love with the characters within the first few pages. This book was one of the best reads on this app; It had a surprising end but you won’t regret reading it!"

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Beautiful yet Dreaded

"The plot is something I would never expect. It's really disappointing yet it is perfect. Loved it and Love you. Missy."

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LOVE IT!!

"This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I'm kinda sad it's short but at the same I'm not lol. The best part is that plot is sooooo different and unique!!"

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Unique

"A nice short book about true love that wasn't meant to last. I love the author because she always thinks out of the box and her stories her always unique but real... I love the main characters of the book and I love the general plot. If u're looking for something different, this book is for you"

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Differwnr

"Very different plot"

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Ok till now

"Insane and sane in love .,...."

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Tragic but loving it!!!

"Amazing, emotional short story,simple plot but heart warming, realistic and tragic."

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Beautifully tragic!

"Beautifully tragic! It's so well written that I'm left amazed at the authors ability to reel me in and break my heart."

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Delirium

"Sad ending but worth it cause I love the ending to be unexpected "

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Delirium

"My granny used to say: "If it wasn't for them, the sun would never shine." and this fairytale-ish short story is about one of them. Beautifully written sad story that remind us of humanity. A big plus is male lead that is not a dimwit, but fully aware of his loves condition and as much as he's afraid, he's ready to learn and help. Would love to see more of similar stories and maybe can stand next to "Silence" as a part of a short story series."

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DELIRIUM

"SAD, SAD STORY BUT VERY BEAUTIFUL! PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND PEOPLE WITH ISSUES! THEY ARE SOME OF THE MOST LOVING PEOPLE IN THE WORLD! PEOPLE WITH FULL BRAINS OR WHATEVER ARE THE ISSUES! CRUEL AND EVIL PEOPLE!"

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Delirium

"Mind boggling? I'm very very surprised and in denial. That plot twist is just... wow. I want to share this with everyone!! I want to see their reactions to how this story made them feel because this made me feel a boatload of emotions. I love your writing style and I would love to read more of your works!"

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Do check it out

"This is one of those books with so deep meaningful life lessons... it’s short but that’s what gives it so much power and definitely worth your time "

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Sad yet beautiful story

"The ending did make my eyes water up just a bit. I definitely recommend this book, it’s sad but a beautiful love story "

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Beautiful

"Accidents happened. They found their heaven. Nice way to end the story. But it still sad though.. Aghh... i 'hate' you author😣 pls write other story with happy ending..... "

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One of my favourites

"From all the stories that I've written over the years, Delirium is, without a doubt, one of my favourites!"

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It was so sad and traumatic yet it was so beautiful at the same time.

"This saddened me a lot. I felt as though the world didn't deserve her and that he was good for her. It was sad and the trauma that she faces is long and hard. But she does it. And he finds it beautiful... finds her beautiful. And this was soo good to see how they both evolved around each other. I'm sad it ended that way. But it was a great story."

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