What is your opinion?
Mike and Boo and Sulley
"Hi a lovely tale, that speaks of lost time, and lost opportunities. We realise this was the message you were aiming for, but a little more explanation for those of us who didn't follow Monsters Inc. would have been useful. We feel also a slightly stronger end could have been plotted, by perhaps giving them all one more memory to share of the day. Someone to defeat, a mystery to solve - something like that. But all in all excellent writing skills, filled with humour - we love the door that had been added. Keep writing, and if you could find you way to reviewing a chapter or two of our work Psychic we'd be grateful. We can, at the very least, promise short chapters."
Tissues Required
"For everyone who loved Monsters, Inc. as children, this story is definitely one that will make you tear up. The story was engaging and interesting to read. I felt that the story was lacking in detail though. The author relies on the reader's knowledge to fill the universe, and very sparsely includes information. I think that going into this endeavor pretending that this is completely your own universe and the reader understands nothing would build this into an even better story. There were a couple things that felt mildly out of place or confused me as a reader. I put the direct mentions to these issues in the spoiler section at the end of the review. Otherwise I thought this story was interesting. I saw no grammatical/typographical issues and the plot of the story was decent. I would suggest this to anyone interested in short stories. ****WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD*** The advice about school to the woman's daughter felt very strange and out of place. There is a confusing sequence of please come to my funeral in monster land, and please come to die here. Isn't he visiting her because this is the last time he can visit her before he dies? I became really confused by this sequence of events."
Mike and Boo and Sulley
"Where is the rest of the story?😑"
