Mystics (Book One Of The Mystic Series) by EverElemental at Inkitt
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MYSTICS (Book one of the Mystic series)

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Summary

Void was just an ordinary orphan.Nothing special about her. Within no time she was freed from the place of terror by Ash and Flint. She learns she is a Mystic.A species of human that control the elements. They are forced to hide and run from everything that wants to see them dead.She must learn how to live the life that a prophecy bestowed upon her.To endur all the highs and lows that come with it and to take her place among her brothers and sisters in arms

Status
Complete
Chapters
17
Rating
4.7 9 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Void

Hi. I’m void. A strange name, I know but when you learn a bit more about me, it won't seem as weird. I’m what you would call a mystic. At least that’s what we called ourselves. You heard me right. We. I’m not the only one.

My tale begins when I was just 7. No more than an orphan. An unimportant, insignificant orphan. I was told my parents' disappeared. No signs of a struggle, no footage of the incident. The only camera still working, saw me running from my home in terror. I ran straight to the police. By the time I got there and had them come to my house, my family was gone. Just a large spherical-shaped whole in my room.

They immediately took me outside and asked if this was where I lived and I just said one word. “Mum.” I started to cry. They comforted me and then put me in their car. They continued to stand there baffled about the damage. None of the neighbours heard a single peep from our house that day. The police took me to the orphanage straight away and I’ve been here ever since. I had refused to give them my name so they decided to name me void after what had happened to my home.

The matrons here call me Hollow as I never speak. Never show signs of personality. I would sit there blank-faced never playing with the other girls and when it came to having to make something I did exactly what the matron made. Never anything different. This went on for five years, but finally, something changed in me.

I watched as a girl just like me walked in. Her story was similar to mine but instead of empty space, all that remained of her home was a single pole on which they found her sat on. The rest of her home had turned to dust. She too refused to give her name and so was called Ash.

I went up to her and instantly her personality changed. She went from looking like a corpse to being full of life. She grasped my hand and pulled me to the nearest window. She told me to jump. I was very reluctant to do so. She then picked me up and sort of lobbed me out the window. I fell out the two-story window and came tumbling down a hill. My head was spinning and then I slammed into a rock and a boy came running towards me. He tried to pull me up but I blacked out.

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Yes, this is very good. However, exchange "Whole" for "Hole". I think that is what you meant to say, right?

7 years
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The concept is original and the characters are beautifully written. You are FAB!!

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Hello, I would like to invite you to join writing competition. Can I DM you through your social media so I can explain it more in detail?

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