What is your opinion?
Mystic book one
"Very interesting book so far not sure if everyone would like it but try it for yourself. I think you will be surprised. I know I was. "
Good Beginning
"This book was really good. Looking forward to the sequel"
But the concept isn't void
"Interesting concept which is having enough potential to grab any reader's attention. Great work"
Great so far.
"The story so far is great. I love the suspense, and build up of the beginning of the story. Definitely an interesting plot. Minus some dialogue, and punctuation errors the story flows nicely. The small errors do not distract from the story. I’m really curious to see where this story goes. Definitely a great read for anyone in sci-fi. I hope to see this book in it’s completion."
Mystics
"This book is amazing so far. It had me laughing and crying at some times. The grammar was great, and it was hard for me to find any mistakes. This story really made me put myself in Void's place. I'm not usually a fantasy reader, but it had me captivated. Great work!"
Wow
"very nise"
Mystics
"Honestly, this book is great and I can see myself waiting weeks for an update because of how much I love it so far. The author is brilliant and knows how to word the book in a way that leaves you wanting for more. The topic in itself is unique on its own."
Good
"Your idea of the plot is fairly intriguing, and I want to read more, considering how you started with your characters. But there are major grammatical errors, you really need to work on, because they deteriorate the writing performance and execution of your plot. You could put in more depth in the characters so that one can understand their mindset better. There is still room for improvement, so a 4 star overall. :)"
REVIEW
"I don't think that you know we have to use a word starting with a capital letter after we end a line with fullstop. That's very silly. The writing style is bleak, and hasn't gotten me hooked. Try improving. Try giving things some details. Emotions are not expressed properly. Good day."
