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The Uniondale Hitchhiker

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Summary

Fictional story based on true events

Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

He just finished his shopping list as a call reached out for Jacob:”Honey, please dont forget to bring me the broccoli. Thank you, I love you.” said Mary. “I love you too.” She hung up the phone. Jacob nearly forgot the broccoli as he put down the phone. Quickly added this item to the list and nothing comes between him and Uniondale. The aged clock on the wall of his working class house, above the passage to the entry area shows it was close to 8. On the left side of the passage hungs a calendar with the mark on the 22cn of January. Jacob and Mary were new to Willowmore. Around 60 km separates Jacob from his goal in Uniondale. This Tuesday, Mary was working at the Diner Pittsburgh at New Hampshire Ave 53. She had late shift and Jacob had not had a job yet. With their saving they could live very well but Jacob needed to contribute to the cash flow. A glance out of the window reveals the yawning emptiness of Kangoo Blvd were no one got lost after rush hour. He puts the key into the ignition lock of his old Ford Capri and it turned on moaning. Jacob was on his way to Uniondale for shopping. After approximately 2 mins, he left the Kangoo Blvd in direction to the Uniondale Highway.

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