What is your opinion?
Can't wait for more
"It started out excellent. The story seems great, I love that he is willing to give up anything to protect the one he loves."
Story
"Cant wait for more , this is amazing book ."
Something New and Exciting
"I have read a lot of Werewolf stories and this one is like no other. I like that it started with the mates already knowing each other. That the story is about the journey of the main character to protect his mate and showing what lengths he would take to protect her. I hope to see more books like this one out there."
A Wolf That Cried For Help
"Shifter romances are my favorite and this book definitely did not disappoint! The character development is amazing as is the story over all. I truly recommend this! My only criticism is some grammatical errors (I have these in my books). "
The Wolf That Cried for Help
"I like how the plot is headed, all I could really comment on, is the punctuation. It’s okay, I make grammar mistakes too, it’s just something to be on the look out for when writing. I would suggest to add some commas here and there, and cut some sentences shorter. Other than that, it’s all good! ;)"
Compelling
"Let's just say, you have my undivided attention. The plot is great. It has a shadow of mystery around it which will compel you read further and find out what's going to happen. I am extremely eager to know what will happen later. It just needs a little editing on its grammar and punctuation but that can be fixed very easily. Overall, the story is great and I am pretty sure that whoever reads it, won't regret it."
Attention grabbing
"As always the first chapter sets up one of the main characters really well and answers what his goal is. The way you describe what is happening to him and around him draws the reader in and has us wanting to know more. Why is he doing this? This gets answered but we don't know what hell do next and that leaves me wanting to read more. I always love when you start a chapter in the action. I can't wait to see how these characters develop and what will happen to then now. Keep up the good work."
1year ago?
"I'm curious to know, why still a work in progress and unfinished? Well, I enjoyed as much as you were able to complete. I pray you are well, safe and strong, fino a quando ci incontriamo di nuovo jusqu'à ce que nous nous revoyions hasta que nos encontremos de nuevo 😐🙃 "
Great read!
"The plot is great, the story is amazing, never dull! I love the characters. The plot is impressive, with all the elements of a good bok!"
A new perspective!
"So as someone who reads a lot of werewolf novels I’ve never once..NOT once have I seen somebody actually bring the Moon Goddess/Luna into an actual embodiment. It was really cool to see how she made the character personable but at the same time godlike! I’m interested to see more!!! "
This story will catch you from the start
"This chapter was beautifuly written. I love the passion Liam and Zara have. They show that even after they gone through, the love and passion they have for each other are still strong and after what they went through. The detail is beautiful and you can't feel that they are truly determine to move forward for each other. I can't wait what comes next "
Review in Progress
"From what I'm seeing so far, it looks like you have something interesting going on for you so far. The promises that are being made in the first chapter kinda make your readers yearn for what is to happen to the protagonist's lover and a declaration, an oath to protect them. The characters being presented seem almost sacred and the important moment that we see in the beginning is clear to see. I won't deny that I'm definitely getting distracted by the disruptive flow that's presented in the story. The dialogue and their feelings and/or actions aren't coordinating harmoniously. There is definitely some tweaks that can be made here and there such as looking at how to properly administer commas and periods in dialogue. It is important to have them done properly as to not break the flow of sentences. As for the dialogue itself, I don't know if I'm feeling the strength of the protagonist's determination to just get their life straight. It needs to be written to be seen in a more solid and unwavering way or clarity if that was your intention. Grammatical errors completely ruin a feeling that you were trying to write for so I highly recommend you fixing this. Ignorance is not bliss when writing. Weird awkward statements something like "he spoke every word of truth" as a way of "he said honestly" is confusing than the simple and more concise. Don't forget this is a review in progress. I look forward to reading the rest of your story when I get the chance, but I guess these first couple of points will guide you in what to edit and should occupy you long enough before I finish the rest. I think I'll leave the rating as that for now."
