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What is your opinion?
Short-but-interesting
"Hello. I just want to stop by and tell you what I think, though I'm nowhere near a professional writer here. To be honest, the only reason I read this in my office hour is just because it is so short. I like how you made us read the woman's thoughts first and then continued to reveal the reality. I also like the ending. For me, it's one of that stories that leaves questions in the reader's mind. By the way, I'm looking for short stories I can adapt to a short play. This one is too short, though. But maybe one of yours can be the one :) Regards, Kei"
Pain
"The emotions and the point of view were clear. However, it could use more."
