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Mistaken Turn

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Summary

Max and Rebbeca were sliding down with their sleds and took a wrong turn. They were going to fast and couldn’t stop. They slid. And slid. And Slid! They flew into a forest finally stopping. But they stopped at a really old creepy house. Will they found out the secret about the forest? Or will they be trapped in the forest forever?

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

~Chapter 1~ Lost On Hike

One Day Max Group call Rebbeca to see what she was up to. Surprisingly she had nothing to do. So they met at a Fast Food place.

Max Is 11 years old and loves noodles. He loves them so much that he eats them almost every single day. And he has 105k followers on tik tok. And he also has 52k on youtube Rebecca is a girl and also has tik tok. She has about 132k on tik tok. And has 41k on Youtube. She loves dogs in fact she has a dog herself. And both of them are christians too. So anyway they were off to lunch.Max ordered a Coke and french fries. Rebbeca also got fries and a coke, but she got chicken nuggets with it. When they were walking to home they heard a loud sound in the distance. Max immediately glanced over and Rebbeca did too. “What in the world was that? “Max said. “I Dont know maybe a car crash.” Said Rebbeca. “Shouldn't We go over and get some help?” Asked Max. “I suppose.” Said Rebbeca.

They walked over and heard a tired, rumbling, dreted sound. “What the heck was that?” Said Max. And then all of the sudden a hand popped out and grabbed the ground! Both of them screamed and ran all the way home. While they were running Max said. (While in a panic) “What Was That!” “A hand of course!” Said Rebbeca Franticly.

When they got home Max Said, “Ok this doesn’t look like our house?!” Panicked Max. they realized that they were in the wrong house.

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