What is your opinion?
Did she just kill her brother............
"Amazing please update"
The long road
"I dislike her father who rape her."
Review
"Overall the best book I have read thus far. The plot and the situations that the characters have to endure is heartbreaking. It’s astonishing how you can put so much emotion and tone in one work. Not one second did I put this book down. It’s a must read. It’s a heartfelt. And it’s one of the best books I have read up here. Keep up the hard work! I can’t wait to read more of your published works! "
my review
"The story has a good plot. The journey of a week girl starts as he unlocked herself from the fear for her father. I enjoyed that part. It's an ongoing story and I am waiting to read the rest of it. The story is as if you can't fight for yourself, nobody is going to help you. A good way of lightening the fact some silly mistakes are there like don't using capital letters when needed. But it's ignorable. Finally, a good job., keep doing it"
Just wow
"Loved the plot, and how it was realistic, just have to work on grammatical mistakes. Aside from that, it's a really good story to read"
Abuse to my heart
"This story is heart wrenching and realistic. From being beaten on a daily basis to breaking free, a very interesting story. A little bit mire work needs to be done in the grammar and editing of their mistakes, however, other than that a very nice job creating this story."
Breathtaking
"Great introduction of characters, good pacing, and very well detailed plot. A few hiccups here and there, but it should be all good after first and second editing. The most captivating part of the story is Amanda's struggle with her well-known oppressor and abuser. A situation that most youth can probably relate to nowadays, but she seems to be down on luck no matter where she goes. Finally, an act of kindness from a stranger for a good deed, but she ends up in a very hot mess like they say, "Out of the frying pan and into the fire." I really do feel sorry for the poor girl, I can only hope that things will turn out better for her as the story progresses. Good job Evelyn and keep up the good work."
Captivating story
"The story is told an a sort of a breathless manner which actually works very well. It moves on nicely and although it depicts horrific happenings it sounds believable. I must admit that at a certain point the lack of correct punctuation and the odd use of capital letters did bother me. That is of course easily fixed. Very good job Evelyn!"
Great Plot
"The story is a great plot. I"d love to see what happens next. Needs a lot of work in the grammar and punctuation department. Easily fixed. Other then that, love the story. Would recommend it for a nice reading, it's easy to look past the grammar, to the heart of the story."
This book
"The plot is different. Good kind of different. But, grammer needs a bit improving, and so does the punctuations. Except that, it's really worth a read. "
Heart-Wrenching
"This story definitely touches your heart, that's for sure. There are a lot of grammatical mistakes and punctuation which can be worked on. The book does seem a little rushed in my opinion and I wish the author would take more time to explain more and give more details. I feel like some scenes are just buffers and I don't see how they relate to the story. At times it seems unrealistic to me, but I do appreciate the characters. The main Character is strong and I admire her heart and optimism. She is a strong character and the other side characters seem to be strongly developed as well. Overall worth a read."
