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A terrifying demonic entity haunts a precocious 2nd grade boy by means of his dreams. By day, Nathan Hoover struggles to uncover the mysterious secrets behind the elusive Orange Thing that stalks him when he sleeps, and by night he does all he can to outrun its shadow. The only person truly able to help and understand him is his mother, who was institutionalized after her last encounter with the demon that is now latched onto her son. Join Nathan and his unlikely allies through a bloodcurdling rollercoaster of close calls with the paranormal as he desperately grasps for a way to survive an impossible terror.
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ughhh, the Pokémon reference in the opening paragraph?... has just got to go!!! I originally started writing this for my son, hence the kid related analogies, but now I’m just like cringing every time I read it 🤬
I can either 1. keep the kid stuff and make it sort of a scary story for children, kids DO love scary shit and there isn’t much in the genre of “kid horror” lol... but then I’d have to tone down the rest of the story like the vividly disgusting descriptions which I am fond of
2. get rid of the kid stuff and make it scary and gross
orrrrr 3. fuck it and keep it exactly how it is, childish and disturbing
either way, that Pokémon stuff cannot remain in the into paragraph -.-