What is your opinion?
The Best story
"The plot was amazing. One of the best books I read. You're are amazing writer. I enjoyed this story, so much. I hope you will write more stories. Please write a book. You will be profitable. "
Don't Tell Ellie
"Solid character and story. Could use a quick grammar check but was a good read."
Review
"So interesting and captivating. Wanna read all"
Loved it .It was amazing
"Loved it, it was nice "
Where is the ending
"The plot was never expected wish it was more to read how does it end tough"
Loved this
"I was intrigued by the premise and ended up loving this. I didn't know what would happen next and you did such a good job drawing me into her world, her scenario. The character interactions were well-written and you really subverted my expectations with that ending. I love a surprise and a good ending, so here, have 5 stars"
Don’t tell Ellie messed up ending good story line
"Messed up ending but good story line"
Beautiful
"Beautiful book! The character development was crucial to the story and you pulled it off!! Excited to read more from you!"
Don't tell Ellie
"Wow this book 📚 I have no words seriously like it's so good there is something mysterious about it and the characters, it keeps you on your toes and reading and never wanting to stop, Loving it"
Dont tell Ellie
"A damn good book but with an f'ed up ending. Definitely keeps you on edge though."
It would be cool to have a sequel.
"I like the plot however,it ended so abruptly and there was no insinuating of a second book."
Don't Tell Ellie!
"The author took me on a rollercoaster that was suspenseful and thoroughly enjoyable. In this short but tightly wound, enthralling story, there is enough tension to get your attention and keep you intrigued until the end. The writing, plot, and pacing were excellent. There were no dull moments. There were so many different events taking place without the thread of the story being lost. And Ellie's character was well-developed; her emotional and psychological vulnerabilities make for riveting reading. And the ending... just wow! It was exceptionally executed and definitely exceeded my expectations. All in all, this story is highly recommended. I flew through it."
Extremely good
"The story is effing blast. The use of unique word at the beginning was everything I needed to read the whole story which was REALLY good. I am a new writer so I do not have much idea about the ways and rules in writing but after reading this you have become my ideal. Just loved the story everything was on point no words to describe!!"
Don’t Tell Ellie
"Wow… just fcuking WOW! I’m not sure I expected this to be better than the other book but it really is. Very well written and edited with an easy, flowing writing style. A couple of twists that I genuinely didn’t see and an unusual and quite gripping plot. For a short story, the character development and plot screamed Novel. I don’t know how this book has gone under the radar but it deserves to be displayed. A really really great read. "
Speechless
"Wow... Just wow. Fucking incredible. The writing style: Superb. The plot: Thick and well paced, interesting characters, an alluring romance that isn't too rushed but also leaves unresolved tension. Suspense, dread, and ahhh just such a great mystery. My only qualm is there isn't more of it! I like the ending you have here, it's satisfying in a very unsatisfying way. I'd love love love though to see a sequel told from Ben's perspective - after the events of this where he tries and tries and eventually another outcome happens (don't want to spoil, but you know what I mean haha) Really captivating read. Another one of those "fuck, I wish I thought of that!" moments as I had with your previous book. You have extremely creative ideas, I'd love to brainstorm with you some time or even collaborate on something since I also have a penchant for horror (albeit, all my books on inkitt are fantasy - the books I write outside of inkitt are all suspense/horror though). Let me know if you're interested and I can give you my email or Instagram! Again, an incredible job, really heart-pounding read. You should work on getting this on paperback!"
Great!!
"Really liked this book, although at points i felt i had to skip back to re-read. Loved how unexpected the end was so that was a great plot twist!! Keep up the awesome work!!"
Killing Eleanor
"IT's been a long long time since I love a book so much. I didn't like the end but I am a romantic I like happy endings "
Please tell me there is more…
"I really hope there is more coming!"
Don't tell ellie
"Good story to read . It was quite captivating. But it ended very soon that was disappointing. "
Interesting
"I am intrigued so far. At the end of each chapter I’m wanting more. The relationship between Ellie and Benjamin odds something I look forward to romantically or not. I can’t wait to finish and as of right now, at chapter 9, I would recommend to the YA audience. "





