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Short But Sweet

"I really enjoyed reading this. Finally, a story in the "Slut's" perspective. I'm so sick and tired reading all about the stereotypical "miss goody two-shoes". Why can't the "bad girls" have their own spotlight, too. Everything's fair in love and war. Definitely a 10/10 for me."

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Loved it!

"I love that it is about real life but makes you hope in love again! Really nice story! I loved it!"

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This is one Slut I really admire

"Ava is unapologetically independent and isnโ€™t afraid to go after what she wants. Yes, she sleeps around but sheโ€™s got standards. While some of her early behavior isnโ€™t wonderful she does a lot of growing throughout the story. But win or lose Ava is always true to herself and I admire that. Honest to a fault and zero filter makes for an interesting book! Really loved the ending but I wonโ€™t say anything because spoilers suck. But trust me you should read this one itโ€™s awesome! Drama, romance, twists and turns all brought to you by a very talented and creative author."

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The "Sluts" POV

"I honestly loved everything about this book. Ava is the most relative person & I loved how to the author put real-life situations in the book. Highly Recommended"

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The โ€œ sluts โ€œ POV

"I loved everything about the story and how it shows real life situations โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ"

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The Sluts

"Good story. She doesn't really qualify as a slut but Emma did! Women have needs, just like men. Just because they choose to have more than one partner doesn't make them sluts, I don't care what anyone says! YOU GO GIRL! Life is too short to end up not having lived it to the fullest! Sometimes the end is happy, sometimes not but at least she lived it to the fullest! A few grammar (mostly misspelled words) but was a very enjoyable quick read. Will definitely check out more of your work and hope you will check out some of mine and leave a review."

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Yes!!!

"Finally a story from another POV! I have been waiting for a story like this for ages, and you delivered! We honestly always get so upset with the other female trying to come in and swoop our male protagonist away from his female. But nobody ever thinks about her having reasons behind it! Thank you so much!๐ŸŒป"

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Love it๐Ÿ˜

"I just love it..."

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The โ€œSlutsโ€ POV

"Very cool story I love the originality of the storyline. "

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Perfect

"Love the story"

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Thumbs up!

"Thank you for that story! Sure a girl can have fun as long as she's not in a relationship! I don't think that makes her a slut. I mean, I think it's good to have some standards, though. But there are so many stories about guys having so much sexual experience, and nobody ever minds, just because they are men. Surely it should go for women as well I'm glad the baby turns out to be from Evan, just because not everything always turns out perfect. BUT why weren't they using protection though? That goes for Evan as well as Sean. The guys, and Ava herself of course, should always use protection in my opinion, that's so important. I like the way Ava was confused about her feelings at first. She didn't just go: Sean, soul mate, drop everything else. But the way things ended with Evan, as well as how Mason's live turned out, seems a bit cheesy. And Ava does come across a bit bitchy there. Sean is a little too forgiving as well in my opinion ;) Sorry about the small complaints, but I really liked it :) "

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The "sluts" pov

"Light, entertaining, flows just right"

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The "Sluts" POV

"Great writing. Another one to keep in my library. Thank you for your dedication and hard work in putting these writings out there. "

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Unexpectedly good

"I like the story about self acceptance, and while I understand why words such as slur and whore are used, I would like it better if Ava saw herself more positively in the terms she used about herself. Perhaps recognising that others might use such terms she could consider herself as being unrestrained by social conventions or independent in her exploration of sexuality and her experiences?"

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Great book

"I really liked the story, even tho the ending wasn't my favorite. However there were so many mistakes like you're instead of your, and mused instead od messed, that I just can't give more stars. Overall I would recommend this book, not everyone is a pain in the ass with grammar amd punctuation. ๐Ÿ˜Š"

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"Totally different. Nice writing. So genuine story."

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The sluts pov

"Great book. Great plot, and I was relieved to not have to stumble over multiple grammatical errors. Enjoyed the happy ending. "

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The 'Slut' POV

"An unorthodox love story, but a Love story nonetheless. Beautifully written, with very interesting characters. Amazing content given it was such a short book. Really enjoyed reading it. And was surprisingly please, although not over joy, with the unusual happy ending. ๐Ÿ˜ Congrats ๐Ÿ‘ on a job well. Will be sure to check out your other books."

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The 'Slut' POV

"An unorthodox love story, but a Love story nonetheless. Beautifully written, with very interesting characters. Amazing content given it was such a short book. Really enjoyed reading it. And was surprisingly please, although not over joy, with the unusual happy ending. ๐Ÿ˜ Congrats ๐Ÿ‘ on a job well. Will be sure to check out your other books."

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Amazing

"Life isn't ideal, but most of the time we cope with it. We can plan and fantasize all we want, but at the end of the day fate and destiny leaves no room to change the course that has been set. Finding true love is not without it's challenges and I think as an author you couldn't have portrayed it better. It felt relate able, honest, almost as if it was your reality or of someone close. I'm not for emotions and it's difficult for me to place myself in that kind of situation, but as an author you did something for me I haven't been able to do myself and I wanna thank you for that. I look forward to more of you stories.... I hope that the next one I read is as much fun to read.... "

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