What is your opinion?
Betrayal, Heartbreak, and Love
"When you find a story that emotionally kicks you in the heart, you thank the author for the emotional rollercoaster. This story has dynamic characters, heartfelt moments, and a story that will keep you invested. Great work so far!"
Lovely heaven of a story
"It is very interesting start, hopeful to see some character development that I am beginning to se in both Ian and Dahlia. The only thing I am missing is the explanation with Tony, what happened? He went away but why? Maybe just a little more back story and description of what happened at the party and other events. Other than that cannot wait for your story to continue. How did Ian break her heart etc. Will definitely keep up with reading it. Good Job author!"
Heart-throb.
"You were thrumming the strings of my heart! You ticked every box a classic like this has and you did it almost effortlessly, your descriptions and the time shifts which was exeacuted very well and a lot of writers struggle with that but you did it well. Well done!"
Heartfelt and Happy
"I loved every part of this book! Although you know exactly what's going to happen, you can't take your eyes off of the screen! I love the time shifts, they are effective and easy to follow. The descriptions had every bit of detail that was needed to make it effective. So yeah, would 100% encourage everyone to read this book. We all need a good emotional rollercoaster coaster novel from time to time, and this is the one! "
Finding My Seventh Heaven
"I love getting lost in love stories. When an author has a good writing style in which I don't even have to think, I can just start reading and stop thinking. The story can just come alive before my eyes. With Finding My Seventh Heaven, this wasn't really the case. The firs chapter confused me a lot, because the writer constantly jumped within the timeline, and the first chapter also didn't seem to be necessary. Why do I need to know about this event that happened two years ago? Maybe I should've read more for that, but the rating of this book would've been much higher if it wasn't for that first chapter. Another thing I think could be improved is the writing style. Much of this story is written indirectly, and the reader is just given a summary of what happened. "We had a chatty conversation." "We spent the day at the beach." If these events are important enough to be mentioned, write about them, and do this in detail. The same goes for dialogue: dialogue is often not more than two sentences long, and then a summary is given of how the conversation continues. If someone wants to celebrate the MC's birthday, he says the cute line "I'm not letting you spend this birthday by yourself -- there must be cake somewhere at three minutes before midnight", after which I get to hear in a few brief sentences how they got cake and what the MC thinks of the guy. A consequence of this is that I'm missing emotions. If the birthday was described in more detail, I would've been able to see the spark between them and I would've seen their relationship develop. That would make the story so much better instantly. However, despite the writing style missing that spark and detail, it was still nice to get through. The writer also makes use of great vocabulary, which is why this book still deserves three stars."
