Prologue
Year 6017
Mu Jun Shi * was on duty the night everything went to Di Yu in a hand basket.
Mist covered the land at night, making it hard to see into the darkness. Mu Jun Shi had just made his rounds, ensuring that all his sentries were alert and ready despite the apparent peace. He had caught some of them napping while on watch and handed out the appropriate punishments.
Ah well, he thought. It is to be expected, of course. Meng Xiang hasnโt been attacked in ages. Still, it wouldnโt do to get careless, what with these blasted Heralds running around.
As if in counterpoint to his thought, a sneeze suddenly rang out, disturbing the quiet of the fog-filled night.
Mu Jun Shi half drew his sword before he realised that the sneeze had come from one of his men. He glared at the offending sentry.
โSorry, sir,โ The guard murmured sheepishly. His companion glanced nervously at him, afraid that they would both get disciplined.
Before Mu Jun Shi could berate the man, a bloody tongue suddenly protruded from the manโs mouth. Mu Jun Shi watched the blood drip onto the cobblestones of the great wall that surrounded the City of Dreams.
One drop.
Two drops.
As the pointed appendage retreated back into the manโs mouth, Mu Jun Shi realised that it was no tongue. It was a sword from an unknown assailant!
With a cry of shock, he reached for the other guard, only to find him gurgling and spewing blood, collapsing onto his knees.
Quickly backing away, he put his back towards the inner side of the wall to prevent any enemy from sneaking up on him. Drawing his sword, he crouched in a โreadyโ stance, preparing himself to face the two men now stalking towards him.
The first hostileโs sword darted towards him, aiming straight and fast for his throat. A part of his brain registered it was coated in blood. With grim determination, he parried, and thrust his sword, quick as a striking snake, into the chest of his opponent. As the man fell, Mu Jun Shi smiled humorously. He didnโt get to the rank of Jun Shi without superior fighting skills.
Rage clouded the other foeโs face. He snarled, lunging at Mu Jun Shi, his blade outstretched. However, he inadvertently exposed himself when doing so. Mu Jun Shi took that opportunity to drive his blade into the throat of the soldier, ending the snarl prematurely.
Bending down, he noted the insignia of a rising sun on their uniforms as he severed their heads. He growled in disgust. The Heralds were becoming way too bold.
Immediately after ensuring that the two attackers were well and truly dead, he snatched up a torch and plunged it into the stack of oiled wood. The flames and smoke produced would serve as a warning that Meng Xiang was under attack. Already, a pair of soldiers were running towards his location, hearing the brief struggle that had ensued.
โSir! Are you all right?โ
Glancing at the soldier who spoke, Mu Jun Shi noted the manโs rank of Xia Shi **.
โYou areโฆ?โ He asked.
โShu Xia Shi, Sir!โ
โI have a task for you, Shu Xia Shi. Take the fastest horse in the city and ride to the capital. Ride as fast as you can, donโt stop for anything, and let the Emperor knowโ - his eyes flickered briefly to the fallen men - โthat the Heralds have invaded Wu Dao.โ
In the light cast by the flickering fire, he noticed a shadow creeping towards them. โGo!โ He commanded, pushing Shu Xia Shi behind him. โWith me,โ he called to the other soldier, adjusting his grip on his sword.
โFor Wu Dao!โ the soldier yelled, charging towards the shadowy figure. A blur of movement, and the soldier stumbled back, his life blood flowing from his stomach. Firelight glinted off the wavy sword as the hooded figure stepped forward.
Their swords clashed, and close-up to his enemy, Mu Jun Shi finally recognised him.
โShan Yu!โ exclaimed Mu Jun Shi. Even if he hadnโt recognised the face of the Emperorโs former Shou Xi Jiang Jun ***, the curved sword was a dead giveaway.
โNone other,โ Shan Yu smirked, and punched Mu Jun Shi in the gut. As Mu Jun Shi doubled over in pain, Shan Yu stabbed him in the back.
Crouching beside the dying Jun Shi, Shan Yu murmured, โWe are the Heralds of a new dawn; just as no one can stop the rising sun, none will be able to halt us.โ
Withdrawing his blade, he beheaded Mu Jun Shi, just like what the Jun Shi had done to his men.
โIโll be sure to give your regards to the Emperor,โ Shan Yu said with finality, as the rest of his men swarmed up the guarded walls, conquering Meng Xiang, the City of Dreams.
1 day later
โYour Imperial Majesty! A soldier from Meng Xiang is here with an urgent dispatch!โ
โSend him in,โ the Emperor replied. โIf it is something military, send for my brother and my son.โ
It was a matter of mere moments before the Shou Xi Jiang Jun and the Crown Prince accompanied the soldier in.
The soldier sank into a deep bow. โYour Imperial Majesty, your Highness, Li Jiang Jun ****, I, Shu Xia Shi, bring you grave tidings from Meng Xiang.โ
โRise, and report, Shu Xia Shi.โ
โThe city of Meng Xiang has fallen to the Heralds.โ
The silence in the throne room became deafening.
โShu Xia Shi, have the servants find you food, water and a room to stay. Recuperate from your journey; youโll have your next assignment within the hour. Li Shang, Li Tung, attend me.โ
โThank you, your Majesty!โ With that, Shu Xia Shi turned and left.
The Emperor pulled out a sheaf of papers from his desk.
โLi Tung, Iโm sending you to rescue Meng Xiang from Shan Yuโs hands. Take however many men you need, leave the rest to guard Wu Dao from the rest of his army.โ
โBrother, our army only numbers 30,000 now. Our latest intelligence shows that Shan Yu has more than 40,000 men. We wonโt be able to defeat him, especially with his knowledge of how our army works,โ Li Jiang Jun pointed out.
โI know, Li Jiang Jun. That is why I am drafting up an Imperial Decree to conscript men from every Family. The other Jiang Juns shall oversee their training. There is no time to send them to the Academy for the full four yearsโ training. You have four months,โ announced the Emperor, โI want them ready by then.โ
Li Jiang Jun gave a tight nod.
โFather, what shall I do? Name it, and it shall be done,โ Li Shang said.
โAh, my son, I have something in mind. I want you to train the men from the Gifted families into a lethal contingent. Your trainers have said youโre one of the best, and have declared you ready to lead. Therefore, I hereby promote you to Jian Zhang *****, so you may effectively carry out your job.โ
โThe will of the father is the will of the son,โ whispered Li Shang, in awe of the responsibility his father had conferred upon him.
โNow leave me. I have to draft up this decree and send my messengers out.โ
With a final bow, son and uncle left the Emperor to his work.
* Jun Shi: Sergeant
** Xia Shi: Corporal
*** Shou Xi Jiang Jun: Chief General
**** Jiang Jun: General
*****
Jian Zhang
: Captain









What a great start! Great job, especially with the action scenes.
Iโm hooked.
Captivating Prologue! I love the story of Hua Mulan and I'm looking forward on how you're going to portray her in the story. You started with a very intriguing scene which made me excited to know what other twists will be present in this version. I do hope Li Shang and Mushu will not be scrapped. *cough cough, Disney* By the way, brilliant title.
wow, this really draws you in! that's an awesome opening to the story I actually can't wait for the rest! ๐