What is your opinion?
Phonix in the mist
"Wow, what a powerful start, i love your book, it is wonderfully written."
Nice start
"You really started with action, i liked that start very much, but i think alot of blood will be inside of this novel, i actually don't care about that, but maybe you can set it age 16 or something."
Action filled intro
"With this story you are easily transported into an action packed battle field scenario that gets you going ,good descriptions and details well executed dialogue."
Well written
"Well plotted "
Engaging from the outset!
"I thoroughly enjoyed the action from the beginning! I'm quite a nit-pick when it comes to grammar and I can say that this book is very well written and engaging. I will most definitely continue as it is updated!"
INCREDIBLE!
"I WANT MORE! UPDATE!!! excuse my fanatics, forgive me but that was extraordinary, simply and utterly and purely extraordinary. Normally I would break down into particulars what I love about a story from the plot, to the characters and writing style but its too difficult because I literally loved...everything, please. Sunday is too far, I must know what happens next!"
Review Overdue
"Remember me from a while back, we owe each other reviews! Here is yours. Your story is very intriguing. I like the Chinese aspect to it. I hope that is Chinese I read. The names of the characters are unique too. While you did state at the bottom of the chapters who they are and what do the names mean, it would be good to write out the translations to some of your dialogue also. You have a very interesting story, and I hope you develop more into it. Cheers!"
Interesting
"There's only one chapter so far, but it looks good! My only real suggestion at this point is that you might want to up your rating to 16+ given the amount of fighting, blood, and death is in just the first chapter. I really liked the imagery in the tongue/sword section. The rest seems more like just set-up and lands a little flat, but the opening scene itself was really well done."
