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An arrow to the Heart

"I think that a lot of people can relate and be compelled to these poems. They were times where thoughts I once had in the past were being written. My only critique was that I was sometimes confused by the style of writing, such as capitals after commas, so I'm not sure if it was a choice or by accident. Anyhow, great book of poems!"

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Touching

"Beautiful poems, very well written and it shows that they were written from the bottom of the author's heart. It touches you and makes you feel so deeply that you forget to think. "

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Neat

"Awesome really love it!"

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Dark Poem Collection

"I've only read the first five poems and will finish reading the rest shortly but I'm already beyond amazed. The author's poems are mesmerizing as they capture so much heart and emotion and are beyond relatable. I'd highly recommend this poem book to anyone who enjoys to read poetry because this author definitely has talent in poetry which is hard to do as there aren't as many lines in poetry as a novel but the author did a fabulous job."

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Broken pieces are beautiful too

"This is just very beautifully written with pain and sadness. I like how every poems are very expressive. 😢"

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Truly inspiring!

"In every sentence I read I am drown to the extent I can Imagine the pain. The sorrow and to be able to write a poem one should be really good. Keep it up I love it. The way of writing to the way of conveying the emotion in every words it is truly a master piece in the making. "

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Beautiful and Truly Inspiring

"This collection really speaks the truth of not just the author herself but for many other people who are afraid to speak up. She really introduces the struggles and difficulties of life. Her writing is so beautiful and it just makes your heart hurt when you realize she may be the one these stories/poems are all about. Please continue to write! Don't be afraid to express yourself!"

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Black is poetic

"A single tear slipped from eye. This is raw and bold and I feel like you are bearing your heart and giving us a slither of your soul and dispelling your pain, I cannot review a poem that is a reflection of how someone feels because how can one critique that but I can say how morosely poetic you are, the vivid imagery, the repetition to repeat and emphases those gnawing words and the case of depression that you have so darkly yet resplendently portrayed through the pain etched in your words"

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awesome

"really emotional and painful in just the right ways"

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