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What is your opinion?
Interesting!
"I really like the plot thus far, I think it's really interesting. It's also very helpful that you included a timeline in the end to further readers' understanding. The plot can move a little too fast sometimes but personally, I prefer that more than something too slow. I really like how you took actual historical events and wove fiction into them. It makes the storyline more believable than just saying this is that just because I said so."
Kind of a hard read
"I have to say that the ideas are pretty great, I like people that wield fire and destroy things when their emotions act up. The only thing I would say that is a little rocky is how you put your sentences together. It isn't very smooth, but it is correct when looking at it grammar wise."
