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Half-sisters

"This is like a messed up Cinderella "

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Alpha and Luna's LOVE

"I am just falling more and more for this story πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•"

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Really good story

"Loving the plot so far. Can't stop reading"

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Different

"You are quickly becoming one of my favorites on here. Loved the story and look forward to reading Times Two. I felt so bad for Jeremy and glad that you are going to explore that more. Lots of spelling and grammar errors in this one but if you read over it slowly you will find them. Easy enough to fix. Keep up the good work and please check out one of mine! I would like your opinion."

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Amazing

"The story was very concise and well rounded. I loved every chapter! "

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Different

"This writer is so good at writing. She has the hole package and know how to keep the reader on it’s toes ❀️❀️"

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Loved every single second

"Hooked from chapter one. Worth the read"

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Different

"Amazing πŸ˜πŸ‘Œ.... second time reading"

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Different

"A lovely short story. It didn’t appear rushed it just felt…….right πŸ‘πŸ‘"

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Different

"I liked the book. It was easy reading and kept me interested."

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Difference

"I loved this story! It was a beautiful love story that had you wanting to see what happened next! Good plotting but not crazy!"

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Different

"I couldn't stop reading until I finished. A real page turner. I can t wait to read book 2"

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Different

"Great story! Looking forward to more."

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"I loved this book I read it all in one go I couldn't put it down. The plot was good and story was exciting . Looking forward to reading times two."

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"I loved the story and characters, but wish there was maybe a bigger climax when Evelyn and Alex find out they're mates. Don't get me wrong it's great as it is, but I just wished there was more of Evelyn being I guess stubborn and making Alex pay for his comments on her lifestyle. I also really appreciate that you carried on Jeremy's story. "

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wonderful

"totally loved the story so far and I'm glad its not something common like the girl putting up a fight and actually saving herself.. that's wonderful. "

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"Omg.. so loved the story.. short and so sweet.. love when yhings go straight to the point rather dragging because sometimes they loose the plot it's self.. welldone.. looking forward to read the nxt one.. my heart really sunk for Jeremy so.. looking forward for a well deserved relationship.. pls keep it up.. welldone..!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘"

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"It was a riveting story from start to end. I loved the plot twists, making the reader assume we know what's going to happen, but surprising us with a twist at most every turn. The steamy parts were a bit short in the beginning but definitely worth while and only got hotter everytime. Wasn't a long read but all the Characters were cleverly descriptive and made you invested in their stories as well. For being a short story, there was really no lacking and it wasn't as rushed as you would expect in a short story. Very we written and balanced. Excited to follow you and eager to read more from you. Wonderful job!! Refreshingly delighted!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘"

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It was really awesome πŸ’—

"It's my 1st story to read and I felt to good and happy to read it The imagination of this story and love ,affections made to like it more Ofcouse to my love "

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Different

"Sometimes in life you need a story that has no twist and turns and is just wonderful with a great ending. Amazing story and great writing. Love it. Simplicity is sometimes the best and exciting story. "

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