Inkitt
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Refreshing story with incredible penmanship!

"This is one of those stories which leaves great imprint on your mind. Totally unique way of writing. The thing which amazed me the most is how pleasantly writer managed to blend lyrics, poetry and even name of the chapter in narrative. Little bit work on editing is required. Very refreshing characters, delighted to find a strong and family oriented female lead. Looking forward to read more."

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Innovative!

"I love the start of your book with the existential beginning of poetic elements and lyric that really gives puts your book on a pedestal of ingenuity and then it flows into the main story, sort of like a deep, reflection and foreshadowing of what is coming, so I really admire that!"

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Good so far

"Good so far"

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Love to see where it goes!

"The strong female character in this story is definitely the draw. Would love to read it again when it is finished."

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Good start, but needs some work

"**This review is of the unfinished book. Up to Chapter 5** The style of the book was interesting, with song lyrics, poetry, and other elements added in to make it unique. I also thought that the storyline was interesting, but the errors in grammar distracted from it. The book definitely needs quite a bit of grammatical editing, but once that is done I think it will be a solid start. The characters are very unique and the storyline seems very well thought out and intriguing."

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