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Love it

"I absolutely love this. I read this the other day and reread it again today before reviewing it. I can't wait for the updates and I think you are doing an amazing job so far! Ill be waiting for those updates!! "

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Searching within

"I love the characters outlook on life, something similar to mine. I love the people, the works and especially the way it's written. Really took me away from home for a bit! Really well written hun, it's deep and profound and beautiful ❤❤"

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A serious topic that needs to be written about

"Depression is different for each patient that gets treated. This story will show you what it is like to be depressed and lonely, wanting a human connection but disliking the fake-ness in society. The main male character is definitely well rounded. A social outcast by choice, although wishing to escape his prison all the same. Longing and hating at the same time... A very hard topic to write about, none the less still a very important. Authors writing style is good, little grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing that disrupts the flow of words. Recommend if you are into more serious literature 💪🏻 "

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Important subject

"This is such an important issue to be writing about and I think you are doing a great job of it. It's a really sensitive and accurate approach. Thank you. The writing itself could use a little bit more punctuation, just to break up some long sentences but the story and the concept are great."

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