What is your opinion?
Great romance!
"This was definitely not the normal cheesy story that I picture in my mind when I think of romance. This beginning chapter really had some substance to it, not all the ushy-gushy. I loved it from beginning to end. It kept me engaged, and I loved the interaction between Jess and Thomas as he drove her to the hospital. It was very well done. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please let me know when you post more of this story, because it landed in my favorites reading list. The reason I marked it down was because I feel like I would have liked to see more build-up during the car wreck. It felt a little rushed, and I think that if you slowed it down a little, it would make the story a lot more vivid. Also (and this might not be something you want to change) I thought it was strange that her mother didn't seem very worried when she heard that Jess was in the hospital. My mom would be freaking out. This was a REALLY great beginning though, and I just loved the whole car ride scene. I hope that this helps. Very well done! This story deserves to be read!"
Good story
"I really enjoy the general plot, it reminds me of the romance novels my Grandma gives me to read. It seems like it could end up being a sweet story. The plot flew forward a bit fast, but in a romance novel that tends to be the case anyways. (="
