What is your opinion?
Excellent
"An absolute fantastic read! Great characters and story. The dialogue is equally good. This should get traditionally published, immediately! "
LOVE IT!!
"This is such a great start! The intro made me want to keep reading more, I can actually picture in my head what I think might happen in this story as it could go so many ways! It is so great how you have started this, especially when it is an unusual start, with them having a child out of being fated mates! I love the name of the name Pearl as well! You have a great plot line by what you have started I can not wait to read more! Great Job!"
Interesting
"I love how you can tell by the way she started writing that is is a story from experience and I for one am interesting in the outcome of the story. i look forward to reading the rest of the story."
Great Potential 💜
"I'm going to say a few opinions, they're just that. Don't take them to heart and please keep writing! 💚Tips Try to make an outline of your story. The basic plot you want to follow, you don’t have to follow it completely. However, it helps with the writing process. Note down notes on your characters, how they look act. What their purpose or relationships are. If grammar is your weak spot, use a grammar checker. It will catch important mess-ups even in free versions! (Suggested for a casual writer.) Try to describe the senses. Things they hear, smell, feel, and see. (I.E Thunder crashed around me as their bright light illuminated the midnight sky. The smell of the rain filled the air, as the cold droplets kissed my skin.) The dialog gets very muddled and confusing during reading. I personally wasn't sure who or what ”the unknown pov” was talking to. Always use quotations and try to use -blank- said/howled/screamed/sighed. Try to incorporate things they’re doing when they speak. (I.E ”I wish you would just listen to me!” Vincent howled through gritted teeth, as he slammed his right hand on the table.) 💚Review For your first book, it is a GREAT first start. I love the idea you have for your book already. I look forward to seeing how your style progresses and see where you go with the story. 🐾From a small author to another; keep on writing. That's how you improve. Listen to ideas people have and suggestions, but you don't have to act upon them. If you ever need help or an ear to bounce ideas off of, don't be afraid to hit my wall. I will gladly lend a hand. 💜 Remember, you're not a machine so it won't be ’perfect’. As long as you're happy with it, that's all that matters.☺️"
Interesting
"Hey love! This is an interesting start but I am curious how this is going to go as time goes on. I am curious to see how your writing skills develop. I wish these two chapters were clear on setting the tone of the story and grasped my attention. I haven't gotten that yet. My advice to you is to plot out your chapters ahead of time and be clear on what you want to reveal to your readers as well as what emotions you want to put out. That is all for now! I can't wait to see what you can do! Happy Writing! -Nsablo"
