What is your opinion?
Short yet Interesting
"Loved it, Short yet intriguing!! I like the way you made comparison, like blood to copper, describing fear as rotten. Ending the story with a question made it more beautiful. Good work with it. Good work with building up the story even though it was short. Kudos to the Author !!!"
Message to navvya
"I hate you navvya."
Beautifully written!
"This is such a good short story that kept me on my toes!"
so good
"It was so good way better than any of my books like usual.I can't wait for the next chapter."
Good Start
"An excellent short story. Could make a great start to something lengthier. For example, expand the background of the two characters. Who was the girl and who was the man, what sort of relationship did they have that he felt the answer was to kill her? He was married OK but does that justify stabbing? You could also expand on the aftermath. What does the mother do when her daughter climbs in through the window covered in blood? On a technical point when you stab someone it isn't odd splashes, you can get practically drenched in it, imagine a burst water pipe Technically could do with a polish I noted a couple of odd words that I felt were out of place but Otherwise, an excellent start would certainly make an interesting synopsis for a lengthier piece"
A chilling start...
"This short piece seems like a very intense set-up to a larger story that I hope to see continued. Though the use of italics after the first paragraph is rather jarring it nonetheless works to initiate a flashback. The piece is largely internal dialogue which perfectly captures at once anger, sadness, and guilt on the part of the protagonist. The plot itself is engaging, but leaves the reader with just enough questions to keep them wanting more. Minor grammatical inaccuracies do not detract from the story which moves at an appropriately fast pace. Overall, a solid piece, and I would gladly read a continuation."
A murder in the woods
"Honestly I loved it! It’s crazy how good a short story can be! I wish this was a novel I want to know more about their relationship and him having a wife! It was short and sweet and left me wanting more! Lobed it keep up the work! I have nothing wrong to said about it, no dislikes! Worth the read!"
A Murder In the Woods
"That was a very pleasant short story!😊 The flow of the chapter is very smooth and it felt as if I was watching a scene of a movie. Your writing style is great as well - especially the parts where you italicised! I wasn't quite expecting the cheating part so kudos for catching me off-guard!😆 I also admired the way you ended the whole story with a question - it showed how the main character felt a tinge guilty of her action and makes the readers wonder what she's gonna do next. Generally, the plot was concise, easy to understand and interesting to an extent. Language wise, I liked the simplicity in your writing without the use of bombastic words! Brushing up spelling (like you instead of u) would further polish your work! Overall I felt it was a great short story!😆 Keep writing and Cheers! XD"
One Chapter Wonder
"I loved reading this! I can't wait to find out what happens next. But putting everything in italics is off-putting. Overall it's a good start but it's way too early to review such a thing. More chapters, please."
I,M IN LOVE THIS
"I love the suspense in this chapter its really good!!! Keep up with the good work."
Fantastic 👏
"This is amazing 👏👏👏. Loved it 😍. All the best to the author for such a great story and I enjoyed the suspense from it❤️"
Loved it!
"I loved reading this! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love how you create tension in the chapter!"
The Refection
"With only one chapter I know it's not right to do a review but for a new author I thought she need support and encouragement and I am here as I just can't stop myself. It was an awesome start and liked it all the way and is furious u don't write a single chapter after this. Please continue with yr great work and ur narrations and plot seems to be very good with this chapter. I am really interested to read further and please go for it soon. All the best ."
Chillingly good!
"Only one chapter and already want more🤫"
A murder in the woods
"I’ve only gotten to read one chapter of this authors work so far, however it’s already keeping me on my toes, I’m intrigued to find out what happens next"
