What is your opinion?
Box of Bones
"So far, this book has my curiosity peaked. The book is well written, and it hints at supernatural happenings that will evolve over time. I’d recommend it, so far, for individuals that enjoy a mystery sprinkled with ghosts."
Box of Bones
"This story is intriguing and fresh. I don’t think I have come across this scenario before. Will think about buying. "
Very nice
"Excellently written story it was awesome. "
Box of bones
"Interesting plot, something different to what I normally read. It was sweet and uplifting. Really liked it."
Box of Bones
"The plot is nothing like I’ve ever read before, and I like it. Great story 😉"
Idk what to write here (sorry)
"I really like the plot. Super good so far, but please focus on the grammar it's kind of hard to decipher some words sometimes..overall amazing book keep up the good work"
This is a good read!
"I love the mystery that surrounds the characters. Very intriguing and keeps you reading chapter after chapter"
Charming
"The story was well written and the characters all fit in nicely. Sad that her so called family were such poor examples of parents but so thankful that she found a better family in her relationship with her "uncle". Love the story within the story regarding the bones and the love story within. The story was great and the birth of the twins and the old souls within will make a great sequel to this lovely story."
Love it!
"I love how their relationship grows even when he thinks she wouldn't noticed him. I like her relationship with her Uncle. They are the ONLY family that she really needs. Her pregnancy is kind of weird but gives hope to those lost two souls."
Box of Bones
"Thoroughly enjoyed the combination of reality and fiction as well as the depiction of the characters’ personalities and their thought processes. "
Mrs
"Beautifully written"
Norm
"Enjoyed this Very much but cannot get into other site ??? for more of it \!"
Great story
"Needs some technical tweaks, but altogether, a great read. Some specifics to read up on: dialogue punctuation, alternatives to dialogue tags, comma splices/comma usage, independent clauses/coordinating conjunctions. —All learnable things, but being a good AUTHOR can’t be taught, and you’ve got that!"
Box of Bones
"Great piece. It was a little bit different which is good. I liked the idea and the story overall."
Her Rebirth
"Everything is superb "
Interesting story
"Very nice I am enjoying it very much"
Poorly Written
"This story is poorly written, at best. The plot is good. However, punctuation errors, misspellings, and grammatical errors plague the story. Also, many run-on sentences are throughout this story. These issues take away from the story itself, which is a refreshing plot. The ideas are jumbled and sometimes repeat the same ideas. The pacing seems slow, too. It feels like a very young person or an illiterate adult wrote this story. These issues make the story really hard to read, enjoy, and, most importantly, understand what is actually happening."
So many unaswered question
"I believe that there should a back story about the main character and Hideyoshi. I wanted to know what event that leads to the curse. If they lived for 500 years in Japan, the main character should have a Japanese name, but instead she was only referred as a Princess. Hideyoshi could enumerate all the main's character past lives and how it was different from one another. 500 years has a lot of story to tell. I believe that there is a book that is going to be used to free them all but the Main Character did not used it. I also wanted to know what's the beef between Hideyoshi and Mitsuhide and how they are able to resolve it on their afterlife. It culd have been better"
Great plot!
"I really liked the premise of this story and could see it being expanded in more detail. A beautiful storyline that kept the reader interested, so much that I couldn't quit reading despite the fact that the grammar and punctuation needed quite a bit of work. Some inconsistencies with details and sometimes the personalities of the MC and her uncle felt confusing. With some tweaking this could be a really, really good story!! "
Posting 5 chapters is wrong. .
"If you don’t want your stories here don’t post them here. Giving 5 chapters and then asking for payment is essentially tricking people, it’s a bait and switch. You know what you’re doing, this isn’t about the explanation you wrote above, this is about you wanting people on your patreon. This is a free app, not a place for you to advertise your work for money. "
