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Wow
"Loved the story, keep writing, good work."
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A Story With So Much Potential!
"This plot is so alluring and it draws the reader in so quickly within two short chapters. I applaud the author for acheiving this. It is a work in progress, scattered with very minor technical issues (such as typos and tense switches), which is why I was not able to give the technical skills a 5. This is still extremely well developed, though, which is why it definetly earned a 4, and would be increased to a 5 once it's edited! The plot was intriguing, and I want to see it further developed with more inward reflection. This author is a pro with describing the characters emotions and thoughts--use this to your advantage, author! Help us dive into the world of this tragic tale and bring us on the roller coaster that is to come :)"
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Lovely
"I loved this story- quite short but contains great message. Loved the way you described everything...It was perfect"
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loved it
"i dont why but like this book very much. I cant get it out of my head"
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wow
"gonna delete my book this is serious, your writing style is amazing the way you detail but quick and snappy Ii agree with others I can see this as a short movie, love conquers all. i want more :) so interesting clear to read and understand it was like action romance a story all in one fast and furious I love it xx"
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Brian
"I can truly see this like a short movie.... it was very well written...very good description of actions, and choice of words.... not bad fo English being a second language"
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