Need Some Improvements

"The idea of writing from the point of view of the rapist is in fact interesting. It reminded me of Netflix's series 13 Reasons Why Season 3, which I had just finished days ago. I have to admit that you have so many things to fix to make this story ready to publish. Firstly, you have to improve your English. (I guess you're not from an English speaking country? Don't worry, I am too!) Pay attention to the tenses and the basics. Read more to learn more. You can also try finding a good beta reader in the group. Secondly, fix your punctuation. Don't overuse the periods. When you imagine your characters pause when they talk, just use commas, or even '...', but no more than that. Try reading some published books or more senior writers' works here to see the proper punctuation. That's what I can say for now. I hope this helps! Keep writing! Regards, Kei Angelus"